literature

I promise

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"I'm fine," he whispered,
fingers crossed.
A six word story.  I love these.  This is my attempt.  Any good?

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saevuswinds's avatar
I would change the title, I feel like it detracts from the ending. Otherwise, a very good piece that's easy to relate to.